Some people say the point of language is communication, and as long as the audience understands, fluency, errors, style, and the like are secondary matters. Suit yourself... As always, these sentences are from student work and my comments are in ( ).
- At first, Lady Macbeth appears as a strong willed, independent woman without a conscious.
- My favorite part of the play was when Lady Macbeth took initiative and made the plan to kill the king. I liked this scene because it showed Lady Macbeth's dominance in the marriage. (Not sure what to say...)
- Looks like it's curtains for Polonius! (Hamlet jokes!)
- Realism extends from the ideas of realism.
- As the story progressives...
- She took many repercussions to ensure that he would not get caught.
- ... his wife killed himself.
- After contemplating his own thoughts... (Is that redundant?)
- In the beginning of the story the narrator was still semi-in the non-mental mindset.
- Hamlet's actions of being noble, honorable, and just is reasonable.
- ... the Virgin Mary is good and riotous. (Maybe she went to Mardi Gras.)
- Hamlet does not cease the moment.
- The setting can be influential to the tone of the character.
- Her character had fully developed into insanity.
- (Said in class.) "High class women look at Motzart."
- His promise doesn't really seem promising.
- The narrator of the story explains her feelings by her actions.
- Every story has a plot and a meaning. (Have you read what passes for modern fiction?)
J.
