It was an interesting summer... again. But that is not what this blog is about! So rather than bore you with my personal trials and travails, we will get right to the good stuff. As always, these are from actual student work, and my comments are in ( ).
- Joseph is frustrated with all the disjustice and lies.
- I don't right well. (Do you left? Do you capsize?)
- I fractured on of my lower vertebrates in my back.
- (Michael Jordan) would shoot over three players fading away out of bounce.
- Outboards tend to have more power than an outboard. (I'll get an outboard then.)
- ... based off from... (Argh! Based ON! ON!)
- Witches are found to be created with witchcraft.
- ... state of the arch technology. (Must be Roman.)
- Dimmesdale was a man with high beliefs.
- ... the idea ultimately adds to the idea.
- Hale signed death treaties.
- In that day of age...
- ... what really happens in reality... (where redundancy is redundant.)
- Everyone loves to see our country compete competitively. (He redundantly writes redundantly.)
- One must ask himself what she wants out of life.
- Mary Warren pleads that she is witchcraft.
- It was not long before the word began attaching itself to all sorts of manner.
I need to get back to attaching myself to all sorts of manner.
J
