Excitement!

It has been a busy spring and I have not updated in a while. Two quick posts before summer. Here is the first. The other will be my favorite: comments from end of the year surveys. As always, these are from student work and my comments are in (   ).

- Macbeth started to hallucentant about Banquo.
- The blizzard snows in the group of Outcasts and leaves them… a more difficult ability to produce a fire.
- The fight… made a sense of his own manhood.
- …the man laughs because his pride is too high to conquer.
- Realism is a style of writing based off of realism. (That is a tight circle of logic you have there.)
- The man does not take warning to the old man.
- She starts buying thighs that make herself happy. (I can relate?)
- Towards the being of the book…
- Illegal immigrates is an issue that the country faces by them taking jobs and making prices of taxes higher for making them have to protect the border and wall.
- The woman… begins to go crazy in her own head. (As opposed to?)
- …a soldier never are always struggles…
- The beginning of every stanza begins the same way.
- In the second stanza of this poem the author makes imagery relations to the reader. (I am a little uncomfortable.)
- Very often the detective is not the crime maker.
- Jack has gone rouge. (And a little mascara as well.)
- This story is made to make the reader think it someone else who committed the murder when in reality it’s someone totally different. (Someone different from someone else. Got it.)
- …a young woman has come up dead.
- …which riots up all the people.
- Finny was never hatred toward anyone.
- Finny still confines in Gene.
- Zeena was always watching over them in disapprovement.
- …nor does he have the money to buy or rent a house someone where else.
- The animosity Gene felts toward Phineas…
- …in exchange for food and board. (No room, though, just double the food.)
- The trees represent her excitement to happy again.

Summer represents my excitement to happy again!

J