7/7/09

Say What?

All of these sentences are from those "last English paper assignment of the year," when they just don't care anymore. On the plus side, it's comedy gold. The papers are on topics from poetry to Hamlet to novels. As always, my comments are in ( ).

- ...the two girls fall at the feet of the name who has a nice name.
- ...punksuation... (Is that like a comma with a mohawk?)
- What is being imaged in the Poem is talking about a cat.
- She stairs at the wall.
- The Emotion he is showing is complaining.
- e. e. cummings is a modernist poet do to the way he rights.
- The blizard of snow symbolizes coldness. (Deep symbolism there.)
- The last two lines (of the poem "Richard Cory") change the poem from an okay feeling to a deep, dark, undelightful feeling. ("Undelightful" should definitely be a word.)
- In the poem "The river Merchant's wife: A Letter" they use alot of differt things to show what her feels where when her has been left her. (?)
- He shoot him self to so he wouldn't have to go throw the pain.
- In the first stanza of the poem the emotion happy is portrayed. It is about two children, with their innocence playing together.
- Modernist poetry is when a poet writes outside the box.
- This idea is shown throughout the poem in different the literary techniques.
- The loss of a loved one can effect people in two ways. One way is physically / emotionally. The other way is mentally. (What about spiritually / psychologically?)
- What are Modernist? (Good question.)
- Then one day at the end of the poem...
- Although they are not the same there are differences.
- She grew love for him. (Don't over water it.)
- Loss means the condition of being removed by a loved one. (Isn't this the plot of The Godfather?)
- He is rarely never home.
- The setting was Jem and Scout always getting in trouble. (Interesting interpretation of the term "setting.")
- During the Victorian ear...
- The reader can tell that Hamlet has an intense feeling of sexuality built up inside him.
- "Hamlet" by Shakespeare has always been renounced as one of the best plays of all time.
- People love to delve into the meaning behind literary pieces of work. (Yeah, lots of people love that!)
- Gene has lacked the knowledge of knowing what Finny is about.
- Gene is afraid to confess his actions to the boys at Devon and to Finny because he is afraid. (So he is afraid because he is afraid?)
- Ignorance can always cause ignorance to occur.
- John Knowles uses cauterization to show Gene as out-going.

Well, I'm going to try to get some reading done while both my kids are asleep! Next post will be comments from the End of the Year Surveys.

Jeremiah

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