Full of sound and fury, signifying nothing

The title of this post is a quote from Macbeth. I choose it because it is appropriate to some of the student sentences contained here, and because most of these sentences come from Macbeth tests. And they think Shakespeare is hard to decipher. As always, these are sentences taken from student work, unedited, with my comments in ( ).

- As he fell, his mind detached itself from his body.

- He is without the idea or romanticizing. (This sounds like a bad translation.)

- Duncan gave Macbeth a higher roll. (I think he laced that roll with something.)

- There are many reasons not to kill the kind.

- William Shake spheres...

- (From the Department of Redundancy Department) ..the desire to want something...

- (Also from the DRD) He does not let it lead to self inflicted suicide.

- Macduff was born by sea section. (It was quite the delivery.)

- The witches told Macbeth what he wanted to hear but not the hole truth.

- My favorite part was when Lady Macbeth died. This is because I don't like her.

- There is overpowering and manipulants. (Have you ever taken manipulants? That's some good stuff.)

- Lady Macbeth's evilness shines through.

- Lady Macbeth did not act lady-like during the play.

- My least favorite part was when Lady Macbeth killed herself because she deserved to be murdered by the Scotlands. (And maybe the Englands too.)

- (One student's reason for not wanting to see the play on stage) I have my own visions of what this play would look like and I don't need some terrible director to ruin my images.

- Macbeth was told to be aware of Macduff. (Don't beware, just be aware.)

Tomorrow and tomorrow and tomorrow... I grade more papers.