12/13/12

Stumbling Toward Break

Here we go. As always these are from student work and my comments are in (   ).

- Some may say this is drab and dull existence to be to.
- They used salt to preserve the ears instead chemical perseveres.
- When acting upon his actions...
- He had to go on quests that tested his strength and cunningness.
- People who are born in socially will be as achieved as can be.
- It is very insulting to those who have an intitlectually disability. (Spell check at all?)
- (Holmes and Watson) realized that the father was killing his daughters after they were engaged with his snake. (That must be some good looking snake.)
- ...the firearm could back fire and put the hunter's lives in danger. (Hunters have nine lives, I guess.)
- Sherlock displays his soupier intelligence.
- Since the beginning of eternity... 
- The poem hints at promiscuity which leads to immorality. (Yes, yes it does.)
- When students dress the way they want to it allows them to dress as they please. (Department of Redundancy Department Award.)
- A physician assistant works manly like most other doctors.
- Most people don't know that facts that it can have on people.
- Music videos have become over sexualized as they portray women in very sensual and suggestive manors. (Oh, those manor houses: so suggestive.)
- After getting caught once driving drink... (Were you, perhaps, writing drink?)

Until next time.

J