Overheard in my classroom this week: "Those shoes, they make my life!" What a sad little life. Anyway, on to the sentences. As always these are from student papers and my comments are in ( ).
- Responsibility is slowly beat into a person at first by their parents. (Nice childhood?)
- By witnessing situations, the appropriate emotions towards it can be achieved.
- ...aliveness...
- ...running umuck...
- Huck Finn is fighting his conscious.
- (In answer to a question: What do you make of...?) My make is...
- The answer to this was a unaimoyous yes.
- Is procrastination really so bad that a "cure" must be found with great haste? (Nah. We can put it off.)
- Everyone knows that not every everyone...
- Volunteers acquire the benefits of feeling good about helping.
- Higher unemployment rates contribute to weekend infrastructures.
- Throughout the United States, child behavior is varied upon good and bad aspects of teen life.
- Before welding was invented people could not bond two pieces of mettle together.
- I would like to know why it is suck a growing problem.
- Some men travel to foreign countries, such as Africa. (Not a country, dear.)
- She said that Angles came down and talked to her.
Merry Holidays
J