12/6/15

Quick December Post

It has been longer than I thought since I posted. But our tree is up, the decorations are out, I have a comfy seat on the couch, and my children are banging around upstairs like bulls in a china shop. What better time and place to update the old blog? As always, these are from student work and my comments are in (   ).

- For the past ten years, the first drone was used. (That drone lasted a while.)
- Danforth was a very one-way mindset.
- During traditional societies...
- ... the Latin routs of the word.
- Strict punishment and physical punishment, also known as corporate punishment...
- He has put up with a lot of carp. (No, this was not a pun.)
- Me and Jesus ain't real besties. (This was said aloud in class.)
- Depression from cyberbullying has caused... mental health in adulthood. (That's not right.)
- Some people just choose not to art. (Not me; I art all the time. I just got done arting.)
- ... many people in the Unites States...
- In a poll, taken in 1996, attitudes towards lesbians and gays increased by five percent.
- Emerson walks alone in the woods because he wants to inspire the nature.
- The author's view on the Salem Witch Trials has been seen as paranoia and unjustful.
- The American Dream is what everyone sees what they want to do in their interests. (I need a nap.)

Happy Holidays everyone!

J